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  • I need brutal honestly on what’s wrong with this ad I created before the company runs campaign with it. Don’t hold back.

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  • Christine

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    October 30, 2019 at 2:02 am

    NOT TRYING TO SELL A PRODUCT: I work for a local indoor golf course and bar, kinda like TopGolf but with simulators. They want me to create ads to run on FB to familiarize people with the concept because it is a relatively new thing where I live. So this is what I created and before I present it to them I want to see what you guys and gals think may be wrong with it (I’m sure there’s a bunch of things) as I’m admittedly neither a marketer nor a video creation expert. Video at: http://imgur.com/a/jEPOe4t – by hq overview downbert – –

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